Feedback to idea for final thriller
Overall, our idea for our thriller was good as it captures a lot of aspects of what thriller films usually show and are about. There are some small changes that we have to make,however, which will improve our idea for our opening sequence. The first is to have the man that is the main character just a fake FBI agent and not someone already in the FBI who is a killer undercover. The second is to have the man take the fake FBI badge out of a plastic bag which was in his wallet to show that it's fake and in fact this man is dangerous.Another change is that the women who get's killed by the man will already be in the house as suppose to the man watching her go in. Lastly, the man kills the woman and straight away goes to a certain spot in the house where something is hidden that he is trying to get, and he finds it but we don't actually see what it is.
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